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IELTS Writing Task 1 · Bar chart

Physical Inactivity Rates by Age and Gender in Australia: Band 8 sample answer

The question

The graph below shows the percentage of adults according to age and gender who do not do any physical activity in Australia.

Bar chart showing percentage of physically inactive adults in Australia by age group and gender, with males in black and females in grey, across seven age brackets from 15–24 to 75+.
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Outline

  1. Introduce the chart and describe its subject
  2. Explain overall trends and the lowest rates in youngest age group
  3. Compare gender differences across all age groups
  4. Highlight the most dramatic increase and conclude about age as a key factor

Sample answer

Model answer — Band 8

Written by WriteReady AI and reviewed by our team · 192 words

The bar chart displays the percentage of physically inactive adults in Australia, broken down by age group and gender.

Overall, physical inactivity increases with age for both males and females. Younger adults aged 15–24 show the lowest rates, with males at 14% and females at 18%. These figures rise progressively through the middle age groups, reaching their peak in the 75+ category, where males account for 44% and females for 56%.

Comparing genders across age groups reveals that females are consistently more sedentary than males, except in the youngest bracket. The gap widens significantly in older age groups. In the 55–64 age range, females reach 38% compared to males at 43%, but by the 75+ category, females exceed males substantially at 56% versus 44%.

The most notable increase occurs between the 65–74 and 75+ age groups. For females, inactivity jumps from 31% to 56%, a rise of 25 percentage points. Males show a similar trend, increasing from 27% to 44%, a 17-point increase. The data suggests that advancing age is a significant factor in determining physical activity levels, with the elderly population showing markedly lower engagement in physical exercise regardless of gender.

Vocabulary

  • physically inactive

    not doing regular physical exercise or activity

    UZjismoniy faoliyat ko'rsatmaydigan

    Physically inactive people have a higher risk of developing chronic diseases.

  • broken down by

    divided or separated into categories

    UZbo'limlar bo'yicha ajratilgan

    The data is broken down by region and economic status.

  • progressively

    gradually increasing or advancing

    UZasta-sekin o'sib boraydigan tarzda

    The temperature increases progressively throughout the day.

  • peak

    the highest point or maximum level

    UZeng yuqori nuqta

    Electricity demand reaches its peak during winter months.

  • sedentary

    spending a lot of time sitting, not active

    UZharakatsiz, o'tirib qoladigan

    A sedentary lifestyle is linked to various health problems.

  • gap widens

    the difference becomes larger

    UZfarq kattalaşadi

    The gap widens between developed and developing countries.

  • substantially

    in a significant way; considerably

    UZsezilarli darajada

    The new policy has substantially improved test scores.

  • notable increase

    a significant rise or growth that deserves attention

    UZajralib turuvchi o'sish

    There was a notable increase in online shopping during the pandemic.

  • percentage points

    the unit used to measure the change between two percentages

    UZfoiz ballari

    Unemployment fell by 3 percentage points last year.

  • engagement

    involvement or participation in an activity

    UZishtirok, ishtiroki amal

    Student engagement in sports has improved significantly.

Grammar highlights

  • The passive voice 'is broken down by' and 'are consistently more sedentary' creates a formal academic tone appropriate for describing data objectively.
  • Complex sentences with multiple clauses like 'In the 55–64 age range, females reach 38% compared to males at 43%, but by the 75+ category, females exceed males substantially' show precise comparison and control of information flow.
  • The use of 'reaching their peak' and 'widens significantly' employs present participles and adverbs to convey trends dynamically while maintaining clarity and grammatical accuracy.
  • Time sequencers such as 'Overall', 'progressively', 'by the 75+ category', and 'between the 65–74 and 75+ age groups' guide the reader through the data logically and cohesively.

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